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Everyone's a critic

"Is this your poem?"

"No, it's a grocery list. If it were a poem it would be the second-stupidest poem in the world."

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starfyrone
Jan. 8th, 2013 03:04 am (UTC)
Edits... insert [] after indicated words
clementines [bahbda dah dah]
chips [ Da dum dah dum ]
argue [dahduedah daduedah dahdeeww]
you [dew dew dewdadada dahdahdue]
snaps [wah wah wanh wah wan wah da wah]
store [dah dum dah doom]
more [dit du da dididid dah due]
again [dee wah wah dah whee da wah de we dah wah da do do do di dewwww-oo-eww oo-wewww]

[repeat to fade]

leiacat
Jan. 8th, 2013 03:14 am (UTC)
I am officially charmed by this.

Also, at work in the pile of stuff that our assorted clients and vendors sent us for Christmas, there is a booklet of bound greeting cards. The cover of it says "this is just to say". Every time I pass it, I wonder if said client/vendor really meant to sound like they're about to confess to swiping groceries.
dragonfly1867
Jan. 10th, 2013 03:09 am (UTC)
That is really fantastic. And brilliant.
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